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So if there was a list of stuff I wouldn't expect to get finished, this would be somewhere near the top... surprise, surprise! I started it last January I think... the last time I even looked at it was July.
I decided that I wanted to try some colored line art and this was already inked and colored so I started working on it again. It ended up being a little more than just that.
50. in the 100 theme challenge- Breaking the Rules.
I can't explain what's going on here XD I was thinking of "pulling the strings" when I started it.
Tell me what you think!
Critiques are welcome!

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:iconwillowescapee:
First off, I must say great work with the fur shading! This is the first time I've ever seen you use this technique, and I must say with a bit more practice with it, I'm sure you'll be able to blow anyone away! The tail looks especially soft and natural, and so does the underbelly. The colored lineart also compliments it as well giving it a really realistic look to it. Just watch those stripes; It doesn't look like the texture showed up on them. Unless you didn't want it to...^^;

I can't be too picky with the anatomy since you started this a while ago and I'm sure you know where your mistakes are with that. But the one thing that does stand out to me is that the arm grabbing the string seems thicker than the rest of the legs...

Anyways, great work~ The yellowed, warm background contrasts nicely with the reds, and the expression is absolutely priceless (: It makes a great icon for you as well, I see :lol:
I hope to see more work like this in the future~!
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Wow, my first critique. ^^; Hopefully it's good...?

Anyhow, I love the concept of this picture. Overall, it's stunning, breath-taking and the colors you've used to create the mood of this picture is amazing in my opinion. The light warm colors in the background contrast nicely with the red and it allows the character to stand out from the background even though the colors aren't too contrasting. The strings are a nice touch too, it makes it seem as if the background itself has a lot of depth to it.

What I like about this picture that makes it somewhat different from your other artwork is that I really like the details you put in the fur; especially in the chest area. The tail area is also amazingly well done but slightly scribbly, but that's probably my own personal bias. I like the shading you used in this picture though, especially on the tail; with the colors of the background being bounced off the character.

I really like the pose of the character, especially the devious smile on October's face and the claws holding one of the strings, it makes the character seem that much intense. While the pose is great, the left forearm looks as if it's slightly bent out of shape and looks smaller then the right.

This entire picture is really well done, the shading is fabulous and I really like the texture you added to create a furry feel to the overall artwork. Great work!
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Holy... macaroni!

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awesome as always :heary: :lol:

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REALISM 8DDDDD
xD I like the fur detail
This is great 8D It looks really cool with the colored lineart :D Great job

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OhMyGosh... o.o This is FANTASTIC!! It looks like laser motion detectors and she is setting them off. ♥ I cannot even think about anything to say~ The coloring and concept of this is amazing

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Ooh this is really cool o:
I don't know exactly what's going on in the picture, but it looks to me like she's cutting one of the strings of fate~
But that's if you want to put a deep meaning to that :XD:

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THAT'S AMAZING!

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Wish I could draw... just need to keep practicing.
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Holy Shit!!! (excuse my french)
That is amazing!
How long did it take you to finish this?

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Looking good and sassy there, October ;P Very fun :D

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EPICAL! Great work! one of you're best~

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XD Your shit is excused lol
Thanks ^^
Um well what I did today probably took 3 hours. That was half of the shading, coloring the line art, and adding the string things in the background.
The rest probably took somewhere over 4 hours... I don't remember but I know the line art took a ridiculous amount of time, which is why I stopped.

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